"This creation has many excellent parts. The appearance and use of elements is quite clever to produce the desired results. The theme itself is somewhat straightforward, but the execution is quite impressive. Using the furniture items as parts of the circuit is extremely creative and rewarding in the final appearance. Additionally, each part plays a role into the circuit or the background. Everything on this creation seems to have a proper place and interact extremely well with the rest of the work. The one issue in appearance is the actual numbers at the top. While going for the tube clock appearance was admirable, the way there are holes in the 3, 2, 5, and misaligned slants on the 4 (there are other slanted lines that merge better in the editor) are quite apparent and don't really give the feel of a tube clock. However, the way its lit up and the circuit below (the main part of the work) more than make up for it and the idea of the visual numbers is appreciated. Overall an excellent work that would have to be nit picked to find many flaws in. Great work!"

So, this work was clear in its presentation and straightforward in execution. The best aspects of this work is its appearance and composition. Every part of this creation plays a role into the dual screen idea, and its certainly appreciated in the final result. The clever use of lighting also brings out the final desired look in an amazing way. However, the drawback is in the elements used. There are a lot of lines used, with very little other elements to engage the viewer. While this accomplishes the simplistic video game look, there's not much more to see. A simple glance provides everything you need to know about the creation. Additionally, the theme is not bad by any means, but could have been expanded on or supplemented for something a little deeper. All in all an excellent work that gives an amazing final view to anyone, but could use a tad more depth.

"An airplane was a neat choice for the theme. There's parts where the theme shines, especially the cockpit and engines. However, closer inspection reveals several issues with the work. The appearance is good for the most part, but somewhat marred by a lack of tail wings and the rear of the plane just looks ended abruptly. The techniques used to assemble the work are decent, if straightforward. One thing that was a problem with this work is some of the aspects do not seem to go well with other parts of it. For instance, the fencing used around the wings does not match the airplane idea. Additionally, the brown coloring is an interesting choice, considering most passenger planes seem to be white or grey. Certainly doesn't destroy the picture trying to be created, but takes away upon look at the details of the work. Overall a creative approach that brought a cool idea to life, but was a little blurry in the details."

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